I want to write more like this. Not a story, just an image. It's a good exercise. :)

The taste of rich, bitter chocolate still lingers in your mouth. Your eyes rest on the remaining bar, lustful, but you know you have had enough. Still...

You know anymore will make you feel sick. You know anymore would be too fattening. You know anymore would mean less tomorrow. Still...

If you eat it, you will prove yourself weak. Pathetic. Worthless. Spineless. Still...

The chocolate bats down each of your arguments in turn by its simple being there. There is nothing that can beat the logic of pleasure: just because...

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